Friday, January 27, 2012

respose to naritive

After doing the checklist for your partner, answer the follow in this format:

Name of Reviewed Individual: Amy Mo

1. What are the strengths of your partner’s essay? Why?

      did a good just of sticking to the story and not going off..
2. What areas could use improvements? In other words, what suggestions can you give
your partner that will help his/her paper improve?
             use more dicripion/ detail
3. What is your favorite literary device used in your partner’s essay?
          i liked the part about the chubby cheeks!
4. What is the part of the paper that stands out as the most "catchy" or important?
             fattt cheakss :p
       

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